Clarify what data is collected

Author: carlbennett

src/templates/PrivacyNotice.phtml

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 <?php /* vim: set colorcolumn= expandtab shiftwidth=2 softtabstop=2 tabstop=4 smarttab: */
 namespace BNETDocs\Templates;
-use \BNETDocs\Libraries\User;
 use \CarlBennett\MVC\Libraries\Common;
 use \CarlBennett\MVC\Libraries\Pair;
 
@@ -17,7 +16,7 @@ $org = $this->getContext()->organization;
 require('./header.inc.phtml'); ?>
 <div class="container">
   <h1><?=$title?></h1>
-    <p><?=$org?> is committed to privacy and security for all of its Users. This privacy notice will explain how <?=$org?> uses the personal data collected from you when you use the site.</p>
+    <p><?=$org?> is committed to privacy and security for all of its users. This privacy notice will explain how <?=$org?> uses the personal data collected from you when you use the site.</p>
     <p><h2>Topics:</h2><ul>
       <li><a href="#what-data-is-collected">What data is collected?</a></li>
       <li><a href="#how-is-your-data-collected">How is your data collected?</a></li>
@@ -35,24 +34,25 @@ require('./header.inc.phtml'); ?>
 
     <h2><a id="what-data-is-collected"><strong>What data is collected?</strong></a></h2>
     <p>The following private data is collected:<ul>
-      <li>The IP address, user agent, and requested Url of all clients accessing the site, used for logging and tracking of actions on the site.</li>
-      <li>A person's email address, used for User account identification on the site and for authentication.</li>
-      <li>A User account password, used for authentication.</li>
-      <li>Social media information, optionally given by the User and not necessary for the function of the site.</li>
+      <li>The IP address, user agent, and requested url of all clients accessing the site, used for logging and tracking of actions on the site.</li>
+      <li>A person's email address and username, used for user account authentication and identification on the site.</li>
+      <li>A user account password, used for authentication.</li>
+      <li>An optional alternative custom name different from the username, used for identification on the site.</li>
+      <li>Contact and social media information, freely given by the user during updates to their public user profile, and not necessary for the function of the site nor their user account.</li>
     </ul></p>
 
     <h2><a id="how-is-your-data-collected"><strong>How is your data collected?</strong></a></h2>
     <p>You directly provide <?=$org?> with most of the data that is collected. <?=$org?> collects data and processes data when you:</p>
     <p><ul>
-      <li>Create a User account on the site, or modify your User profile on the site.</li>
+      <li>Create a user account on the site, or modify your user profile on the site.</li>
       <li>Submit, post, or upload media and/or content to the site.</li>
     </ul></p>
 
     <h2><a id="how-will-your-data-be-used"><strong>How will your data be used?</strong></a></h2>
     <p><?=$org?> collects your data for the following purposes:</p>
     <p><ul>
       <li>To process your requests in cooperation with site features.</li>
-      <li>To track actions taken on the site by a User.</li>
+      <li>To track user actions taken on the site.</li>
     </ul></p>
 
     <h2><a id="how-is-your-data-stored"><strong>How is your data stored?</strong></a></h2>
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ require('./header.inc.phtml'); ?>
     <p><?=$org?> uses cookies for the following purposes:</p>
     <p><ul>
       <li>To record cookie preferences for the site.</li>
-      <li>To keep you logged in as a returning User of the site.</li>
+      <li>To identify you as a returning user of the site, so you may stay logged in to your user account between visits.</li>
     </ul></p>
 
     <h2><a id="what-types-of-cookies-are-used"><strong>What types of cookies are used?</strong></a></h2>