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Apr 24, 2023
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| public Electronic(String modelName, Company companyName, String dateOfMade, AuthMethod[] authMethod) { | ||
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| private String userEmail; | ||
| private int userBirthDate; | ||
| private String[] electronicDevices; | ||
| public LocalTime registerTime; |
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과제는 LocalDate 를 사용하라고 나와있는데 LocalTime 를 사용하고 있네요.
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Electronic 클래스의 productNo은 LocalTime을 사용하라고 언급되어 있는데
User클래스의 registerTime에 대해선 언급이 없는 것 같습니다!
근데 멘토님 코멘트 보고 생각해보니, 회원정보 등록 시간에 대한 필드니까 날짜와 시간이 같이 출력되도록 하는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다. 참고해서 수정해보겠습니다.🤓
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| User findByUserId(String userId) { |
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| User findByUserId(String userId) { | ||
| for(User user : userList) { | ||
| if(user.getUserId().equals(userId)) |
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| User copy(User user) { | ||
| User userCopy = new User(user.getUserId(), user.getUserPassword(), user.getUserPhoneNumber() | ||
| , user.getUserEmail(), user.getUserBirthDate(), user.getElectronicDevices()); |
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.getElectronicDevices() 의 데이터를 변경하면 어떻게 될까요?
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| User copy(User user) { | ||
| User userCopy = new User(user.getUserId(), user.getUserPassword(), user.getUserPhoneNumber() |
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| private Electronics getInstance() { | ||
| if (!(instance == null)) return instance = new Electronics(); |
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null 일때 생성해야 하지 않을까요?
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| if (!(instance == null)) return instance = new Electronics(); | |
| if ((instance == null)) return instance = new Electronics(); |
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| int j = 0; | ||
| for (int i = 0; i < electronicList.length; i++) { | ||
| if (electronicList[i].getAuthMethod().equals(authMethod)){ |
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코드리뷰 빡세게 부탁드립니다!